Re: Comments about the flyer

From: Tofu45 <rpelz34@acsalaska.net>
Date: Sat Aug 18 2007 - 00:17:47 AKDT

On Thursday 16 August 2007 05:21:05 pm Greg Madden wrote:
> On Thursday 16 August 2007, barsalou wrote:
> > If no one has any comments about the flyer, I'll make it official.
> >
> > We will also have a similar flyer for our Monthly meetings.
>
> since you mentioned another flyer let me pass on my 'first impressions' on
> this flyer.
>
> To me, it is a bit busy and somewhat confusing. The three 'bullet'
> statements talk about different events.
> 1. What: is about Aklug, aklug website.
> 2. When is about Fiday nite,
> 3.Where is probably about the When bullet but could be about the What?
>
> The email frame needs Contacts: added to the top of the frame. The mailing
> list rounds out the flyer, added at the bottom, making a very informative
> flyer, but confusing to me, about Aklug as an organization.
>
> I think promting one idea at a time , Friday Nite, Aklug.org, Monday
> Nite...etc. would be easier to grok.
>
> Peace
>
> Peace

I'll second Greg's comments.

Also grey on grey may look arty but to me It's hard to read.

Go for one idea, white space, and easy to read.

         Bob Pelz
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