Re: Comments about the flyer

Thanks for taking the time to give some feedback Greg.

All, any other suggestions as well?

Mike B.

Quoting Greg Madden <pabi@gci.net>:

> On Thursday 16 August 2007, barsalou wrote:
>> If no one has any comments about the flyer, I'll make it official.
>>
>> We will also have a similar flyer for our Monthly meetings.
>
> since you mentioned another flyer let me pass on my 'first impressions' on
> this flyer.
>
> To me, it is a bit busy and somewhat confusing. The three 'bullet'
> statements talk about different events.
> 1. What: is about Aklug, aklug website.
> 2. When is about Fiday nite,
> 3.Where is probably about the When bullet but could be about the What?
>
> The email frame needs Contacts: added to the top of the frame. The mailing
> list rounds out the flyer, added at the bottom, making a very informative
> flyer, but confusing to me, about Aklug as an organization.
>
> I think promting one idea at a time , Friday Nite, Aklug.org, Monday
> Nite...etc. would be easier to grok.
>
> Peace
>
> Peace
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> Greg Madden
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Received on Fri Aug 17 08:04:34 2007