Re: Comments about the flyer

On Thursday 16 August 2007, barsalou wrote:
> If no one has any comments about the flyer, I'll make it official.
>
> We will also have a similar flyer for our Monthly meetings.

since you mentioned another flyer let me pass on my 'first impressions' on
this flyer.

To me, it is a bit busy and somewhat confusing. The three 'bullet'
statements talk about different events.
1. What: is about Aklug, aklug website.
2. When is about Fiday nite,
3.Where is probably about the When bullet but could be about the What?

The email frame needs Contacts: added to the top of the frame. The mailing
list rounds out the flyer, added at the bottom, making a very informative
flyer, but confusing to me, about Aklug as an organization.

I think promting one idea at a time , Friday Nite, Aklug.org, Monday
Nite...etc. would be easier to grok.

Peace

Peace

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Greg Madden
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