[aklug] Re: About origenBOARD

On 05/31/2011 10:57 AM, Tim Johnson wrote:
> * Jeff <jeff@arcticpc.com> [110530 19:50]:
>> http://www.origenboard.org/index.php?mid=about_page
>
> Forgive me for sounding like a Language Nazi, but the writing in
> that site's content needs some technical writing reivew.
>

*review

> I mean no offense to anyone who uses english as a second language,
> but finding someone to review the writing should be inexpensive.
> And if english is their *first* language, double-shame on them.
> Example:
> """
> Origen board used peripherals easy apply to portable device for
> check the various function of Exynos 4210 on embedded environment.
> """
> :) Now I and everyone else will be checking *my* syntax!

english -> English

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